|Reviews for Elliot Jones, The Detective|
| CharissaKarn chapter 4 . 9/17/2012
Please update soon! :) I am super intrigued!
| AoideMythos chapter 4 . 9/3/2012
Ahh! I need to read the next chappie! Oh, and I think you meant choice not chose, sorry for my weirdness... XD Silhouette figure! I'm gonna figure out who this guy or girl is soon, I just know it!
| AoideMythos chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
What's gonna happen next? O_O
I need to know!
| AoideMythos chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
Typical boy! :-P
Mia seems nice! And I happen to have a character named Elliot too, except he's nothing like this one! XD
| AoideMythos chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
I love stories when the main character is challenged! Mystery stories rock!
| CharissaKarn chapter 2 . 8/20/2012
YEEEE! this is really interesting, I want to know whats gonna happen next! :) update soon please! :D
| KiwiHunch chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
I love Mia! She's such an awesome friend. And Elliot-oh, Elliot, being a typical teenage boy ;P
Does this mean that the next chapter is about them going into the big and scary castle? I hope so! I seriously wanna know who this Mr. Redrum is!
| CharissaKarn chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Oooh I'm intrigued! :D I wanna read more! ahah please update soon! :)
| KiwiHunch chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Yay! Mysteries! Whoot!
Interesting beginning, I must say, not quite sure what was happening, but nonetheless, I always love it when the bad guy challenges the detective! All too much fun! Oh, and I found it coincidental that you have a detective named Elliot- and as do I! :D seriously, you think there's a connection? :D
Please update soon! Please! I want to know what Elliot plans his next step to be and- gah, this sounds so awesome!
P.S.: Mr. Redrum? Sounds devious. :)