Reviews for Tell Me Broken Hearts
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
This is a beautiful piece, indeed. I love the last four lines in specifif. All together, this poem was lovely. Amaizng job, keep it up :D
Ditzygirly22 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
As you know, I know exactly how it feels to feel this way. I hope you know this poem made me cry and it's not the first time on of your poems have. Of course, you're an amazing writer, so keep writing!
LsyBlurb chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
This was Beautiful. I agree that the continuity with "tell me" made it that much better! It was so powerful and very evocative, and it flowed nicely. Amazing job!
AquariusGirl230191 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012

I really enjoyed this, it was descriptive and moving too. I like the "tell me" repetition - as if the author is trying to make sense of things and have everything explained when in reality that isn't always the case.

You did a great job here.

Well done!