|Reviews for Good Enough?|
| Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
I loved this especially the last line as it seemed to add even more emotion to the piece.
| Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Simply lovely. Keep it up :D
| LsyBlurb chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
Beautifully written! I loved it. It had a nice melody and was very evocative. Also I loved your word choice. Great job!
- one thing though.. I think you meant to use the word "breathe" for the first word in The last line "breath the last breath" -
Other than that, amazing!