Reviews for Paladin
GayMuffin chapter 23 . 5/15/2021
Your a/n made me tear up. I remember the last chapter I read was the one with Trey finally getting proof of Cindy's abuse and going crazy thinking it was the last chapter. Then life got in the way. That was in 2013 and I was 15 at the time. I'm pretty sure that was the last time I came on this website. Then just a few days ago I remembered I had an account for FP because I was looking for free stuff to read online. I started going through all of my favorite stories and authors and the nostalgia came flooding in. I reread Paladin not realizing there are two more chapters and I love how you finished their story. I've also done a lot of growing in my sexuality and overcoming homophobic ignorance from family. I don't know if you'll ever see this message but thank you so much for this story. It hold such a special place in my heart. Much love! ~ GayMuffin
littlefox chapter 1 . 6/11/2018
And "Tu parles français ?" is better than Parlez-vous français ?
Because you're talking like a boring old man right now xD
littlefox chapter 1 . 6/11/2018
french for "I've missed you" is "Tu m'as manqué" :-)
Inactive1110639 chapter 23 . 5/1/2018
...and it's finished! This was thrilling to read. Also, I don't think it's as cringeworthy as you make it sound like. Writing stories (or articles, or stuff in general) is like every other thing, we get better as time passes...

Thank you for this! (and may I add, "Paladin" is among the top five on this site so far)
Inactive1110639 chapter 18 . 5/1/2018
My heart, oh god, MY HEART, SOMEONE HEL... *faints*

*hours later, returns from the dead*

Yeah, I might have just read like a dozen chapters in half a morning because I'm addicted to this story and the wonderful characters you made - just maybe not Cindy, ugh, may I throw a cup of steaming coffee back at her? Pretty please?

(regarding ypur ribs, HMMM... maybe you're so connected to him that he's sort of become part of you, in a way?)
Inactive1110639 chapter 6 . 5/1/2018
I don't usually do this, reviewing before I get to the end/latest update to a story, but wow. W-O-W. I'm in love with Trey and Logan already... They're little cinnamon rolls who are too cute and pure for this world!

These stories make me happy, y'know? They give me hope of still finding someone interesting... Things like that seem rare, though... *sad sigh*

In sorts, I've been lucky as Logan to have accepting parents and friends around me. I wish everyone had that luck!

Anyway, before I bore you with unnecessary detail, I'm loving it so far! Excited for the next chappies.
Asher chapter 3 . 1/5/2018
Review of an old chapter.. bite me.

Just wanted to say thanks for that Maggie and the ferocious beast reference. Or at least I think it is.

When I read Hamilton it didn't mean anything in my brain. But when I read pork I instantly tried to find the connection and that little memory unlocked itself.
PassionAndFlamez chapter 23 . 12/8/2017
Thanks for making me cry... Best story on this site by far...
GayMuffin chapter 8 . 10/14/2015
Oh my gash this is one of my favorite chapters! I love the photograph idea. Pure genius.
GayMuffin chapter 1 . 10/8/2015
So this is going to be my second time reading this because it is just that fantastic.
chloe chapter 1 . 4/3/2015
I like the begining, here the right translation in french :
I have missed you - tu m'as manqué
you speak English? - tu parles français?
Anon chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Hey there, had to stop reading just to say this s "I missed you" is translated to "Tu m'as manqué" not "je vous ai manqué" because that means " You missed me". Anyway i'll keep reading now hope that helped x
EPuppy chapter 13 . 9/24/2013
EPuppy chapter 12 . 9/24/2013
Argh if trey becomes a freakin cheater lier
EPuppy chapter 10 . 9/24/2013
Best chap of ever:)
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