Reviews for You knew me better than I knew myself
PalindromeIsntOne chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
I think I knew I song by a similar title once...
'My eyes blind but seeing,

My heart crying but leaving no tears,

A frown upon my face, smiles not there.' - I think that section for me is the most effective in the poem.

Also: 'I was alive,

In body but not in spirit'

later linking to: 'I watched like a doll,

All seeing, all knowing,

Yet empty…'

Sad, and well written.