Aww I wish there was more. She needs to break up with Hurley. She has the most connection with Rich, I'm not really feeling Keaton ;-)

Reminders of Kelly make me nostalgic. I miss her. I haven't figured out who Izzy is...

Can't wait for more! ;-)

I really like this! I read the prequel to this and now I'm on my way to read all your other stories! You're a brilliant writer!

i like it keep on writing!

ahh...i'm not sure who to root for, hurley or rick. I think i'm going with rick for now, love it!

I LOVE IT! O: FANGIRL SCREAM! I was expecting something more dramatic with her mum though! OMG! My idea for the next chappy would be her surprise visiting hurley, finding him cheating and then coming back and being comforted by rick, then them floating into the sunset lalalala like- ok jks on the last bit (maybe). Wow time to take a breath! One thing I love about your writing is that you have no mistakes! Gosh, I hate bad grammar.

Are you on wattpad?

Also, you should introduce a really mean, girl character whome Hurley would be cheating on Ginger with, and then have her move to the college as a transfer and rub it in Gingerss face and be all mean like.
And to be quirky, mean girls name should start with M and she should not be brunette... and have really long manicured nails like claws! grrr

OK too much sugar today, sorry bout all my crazy ramblings and ideas...

UPDATE SOON OR DIE! Jokes... .

OMG UPDATE OR DIE! lawl jokes

lovee!

Do can't wait for that answer myself also interested to see what happens next

So I finally caught up with this story of yours. She has a lot of guys just falling down on her feet. She just can't seem to keep track of one. I think this story will be interesting by adding in a family dynamic. I wonder when Elton will find out. I am seriously curious with this cliff hanger you left, I want to know what happened. Why did her Mom do that? I think it is cool how her family is of dancers. I also wonder what will happen to her and Hurley's relationship? From right now, it just doesn't seem to be going too well . . . .

Yeah, this is progressing super fast. I usually like it slower, and I still think that Ginger/Ivy is being way too presemptuous in the beginning. She just assumes that Hough is her mom, even though she has no proof besides looks. Sure, she turned out to be right, but it doesn't seem too realistic. If, hypothetically, I were adopted and I came across a woman who resembled me, I wouldn't jump to the conclusion that we were related; I'd just think that it was interesting in our physical similarities. Know what I mean?

[She didn't owe me anything…you know even though she kept my apparent twin and gave me up] Comma after "know."

Okay. Ginger immediately gets to the heavy questions; makes sense, seeing as she gets to the juiciest gossip around town. Good work, although I'd like to see some more stuff about Keaton and Hurley—God, I love Hurley. Don't make Ginger cheat on him, or I'll be completely brokenhearted.

Never mind, I take that back. I want Hurley for myself, so she can go ahead and cheat. :) LOL. Good work, although I do suggest pacing this slower and writing about more tension and slip-ups between Hough and Ginger, and thanks for the update. *heart*

Awwww how cute I love it, update soon. I can't wait to read what's next

Well...this is all moving a little fast. At first I thought it wasn't moving fast enough now I see like its all going at 100 mph. So here's my concerns/advice. I thought that the way her mother found out about her was just a little too cliche for me. I was hoping you wouldn't go that route and have her mother find out accidentally through the photo. In fact what I thought would be more realistic of Ivy/Ginger to do was to be upset. Since she's found out about this she hasn't been mad. Sure, there was the shock (which was expected) in the beginning but after that everything just was so passive. I needed her to have that fire and drive that she's had in the past. This woman for all she knows could have given her up and chose her brother instead. This piece of "knowledge" whether true or not is disturbing and upsetting so I figured that she would get very angry over it and even confront her mother. If not I expected her to dance out her feelings, which she did, and possibly blow up on her mother who left her. There are a lot of things that could be worked on, one of which that includes the characters and their dialogue. If not in this chapter I would love to see her just let go and feel her raw emotions. Besides that this was a pleasant surprise in my inbox. -Purple

If you still have writers block, reread what you've already written,and then start off with what you ended the last chapter with like... Keaton saying "who is Alexa black?"

Long time no see? It has been a while hasn't it. Luckily this was me of the tens of stories that I'm following that I remembered so I didn't need to go back too far. I breezed through this pretty much. I am looking for a little more tension and resolution. Ivy obviously has been attracted to Rick for how long? She needs to settle that. Also there should be more of a "plot" and not the day to day things. I would love to see her stuck in more of a jam now instead of at the very end where everything will gets heeled up. The fact that she found her birth mother is pretty great but I hope this wont be string for too lo and instead something will happen soon. That's my advice. Till the next chapter. -Purple

Ah, excellent. It's whatthegreencarrot here, but I was far too lazy to sign in to my FP account, so... This is my not-so anon review. Yee.

The thing about Ginger's brother and mom, it's not entirely credible. I mean, most people wouldn't look so far into this, but critic runs in my veins, so I'm just delivering it as I think. I've seen billions of people who look like me (after all, they do say that all Asians look alike... :P LOL, racist but true), and I don't just assume that we're related. Ginger could've just spotted a blond with similar facial structure, you know?

Eh. Yeah, looking too far into it, but that's my job. You don't have to do anything about it, but I think it'd be better if you edited it and dropped hints about the brother thing. The secret's already spoiled for most of us, but other new readers might like the mystery. Just a suggestion.

Whee, I'm glad for that update. I've had nothing to read for the past two weeks, because I've almost exhausted all the readable stories on FP, I think. I'm searching, but nothing good is coming up. Except for this one, of course.

Ah, I knew trouble from that club was going to come in. As for Izzy, I'm almost entirely clueless, but I'm guessing she's from the story with Kelly and Nate (ohmigod, so sorry...I can't remember the name of the story). Am I right? *winces* Yeah, I'm probably right, but only because it's about as clear as day. Not the sharpest knife in the drawer, as you might've noticed.

Anyway, thanks so much for the update. Loved it, and that's a wrap! Bye—

-whatthegreencarrot