Reviews for Sleeping Kiss
TheForgottenWarrior chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Haha, he better be asleep. Wonderful little one-shot.
-Warrior
QQ chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Short and sweet. But more detailed description of the characters' gestures, eye contacts and the interior of the room would help create the mood. Also makes it more whole. But still cute
LadySGH chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
aww this was so nice and sweet. *blushes*Good job.
Shockinglightning chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Awww... I love it! Hope u would continue with it. I want to know a little bit more.
rosesshouldbered chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
This was amazing, really sweet. I hope to read more fics like this in the future. Thank you for a brilliant read. :)
swims-with-fishes-42 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Loved it! I really liked this one shot. If you want to keep writing it, maybe you should write the long version of their story with a different title. (just suggestions if you are really proud of this piece)
absentmindedprofessor chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
Well, I thought this was very sweet. Haley and Zack seem like the perfect couple - friends at first, both of them crushing on each other, and still playful. Hmm... maybe Zack's habit of talking in his sleep might get him into more trouble than just "I love you"! But yes, I liked this. I also liked the last line - "Nope. Not asleep at all." It was both cute and funny. :D
GinBrat chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
That is so cute! I love how he wasn't asleep.
Jeremy chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
best short story ever and smart ending
LsyBlurb chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Oh my gosh... SOOO CUUTE! I love this! You wrote it beautifully, this is definitely a fav! Short and sweet but oh so good! (: keep it up!