Reviews for Creatures |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing in my opinion and I think you should do another one. I absolutely loved this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great book. Could be an even better series! |
![]() ![]() ![]() In this chapter the names of the characters got a little muddy, be sure that the characters names and personalities are the same throughout the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far a very interesting story and a new take on the supernatural. I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like ur story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the story cant wait for upload |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a lovely family. I'm glad Karen has found someone she can rely on and doesn't need to seek the approval of people who don't care - regardless what they say. I love it how the interaction between Talon and Karen changed. She just needed to open up. Well done. Update soon. I want to go to Vegas! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a lovely 'mother'. Somehow, I have the feeling she wants to marry off Karen to a man of her choosing. But their visit brought Karen and Talon closer together - I can't be too irritated by Mrs. Hintz for that. But wasn't there a physical bond? Shouldn't that have manifested itself during their ... session? Great chapter. I could picture Karen's whole family strutting down the halls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad she didn't retreat inside her head. But what family? Please let it be her brother (and her adoptive parents mayber) and not someone else. Not after they took such a big step into the right direction |
![]() ![]() ![]() Karen staked her claim. Was about time. I'm glad she didn't find an escuse for the ring. Great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If all the 'sacrafices' don't show her that he's being honest, I don't know what she wants from him. It's time to make up her mind ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, Karen is starting to irritate me. At least, she compromise sometimes. Though, she is making everything more difficult than it needs to be - including their fighting. But I'm impressed with Talon and his patience. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, I don't get Karen's behavior. Talon is pompous, nothing to argue there, but he's changed and all because of her. And she is just too stubborn to admit it to anyone (including herself) that she like-likes him. Women! Funny idea with the ring. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never underestimate a small woman. Loved how you described Karen in that exercise room. But was it a real creature? I thought those were just holograms. Talon is getting soft. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bonding with a tall, dark and dangerous guy? Living together with a bunch of hyperactive people? All of that shortly after being attacked by some strange 'not existing' monster? Poor Karen. Though I love those characters. |