Reviews for The Mark
Chaos-Mode chapter 1 . 7/15/2016
Hot...loved this oneshot. Thank you for writing this
annayh44 chapter 1 . 2/18/2016
WoW nice one-shot...its rare to find vampire one-shot !
hitokori midnight chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
Aww that was so cute please make the next chapter.
DragonSecretKeeper chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
I liked the story though I got a little confused on some parts.
urtenshii chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Definitely a good story.
It was kinda rushed, though.
There was no clear transition whatsoever from hating him to falling heads over heels for him. I mean, you can't just easily like your captor, could you?
If you would've made this a little longer then it would've been clearer and better. A two to three chapter story would do to just show how, behind all his rough facade, is a man (or vamp-werewolf hybrid) who was desperately in love with a woman. Also, how the woman, as ridiculous as her situation is, fell in love with the hybrid.
All in all, good work though! I definitely enjoyed the story!
Keep on writing!