Hahahahaha man don't tell me your stealing sky! :P
Amazing chapter, though a little short. Oh and this skylar better have blonde hair and Green eyes and no resemblance to my boy. Or else there maybe some trouble... Hahaha

Yay! Amazing chapter :D Ben is... sigh... I like Keijon but I thought you were going to get rid of him? Anyway, that part with the 'more, more' did sound sort of wrong haha. I hope to read more and... I wonder who Ashley will choose... Update soon!

SO SUSPENSFUL (I don't know if that is the right word...). I CAN'T TAKE IT! I don't know who to choose. Ahhh... I choose Keijon ;) I might as well stay with my first choice haha. GREAT chapter :D

I told you I would read some of your writing :) Its good! Interesting plot! I wonder who she will choose... I like the name Keijon! :D

Good, I guess!
Although, television is usually TV, but in grammatical terms, T.V. What I'm getting at? It should be capitalized. Also, I would have liked to have seen more of Keijon's reaction to that little scene there. In my opinion, we only saw a glimpse of it. Story related news? I'm kind of rooting for Ben now, haha. (In story, mind you.)

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Cool story bro. I think you're doing really good compared from before so keep up the good work. And use my name. :)

le gasp!
lol for syrup scene... u
and oh no! it's HIM. No, no, not that HIM, the other him! XD

:(
Hmm..
Me thinks Ashley jumped to conclusions here.
I'm sure he was gonna say "I love you too!" ... ;-; He has to!
...yeah, me like-y.

Aargh.
I'm in love.
You must update, yeah? _

Aww... XD Cute!

This is meh... reading yo' story.
It tis' awesome. :) But I need to read the other chapters, so, yeah.
Onward, to reading!

I feel so sorry for Keijon right now! But also Ashley. His name is interesting where did you get it from?

I can see her strength and determination here :) this is good :)
And danny the cocker spaniel makes it better ;D

I am really getting into it :) I can't wait for the next chapter.

I like it :) Please writ more :)