Reviews for Anima's Dancers
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 9 . 12/27/2012
Amazing chapter! It's amazing how devoted those people are to their god. Even the king sounds like a priest! It'll be interesting to see what this has to do with the story if anything.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 8 . 12/17/2012
Amazing story so far! I love the different way that the people speak! It's really interesting, though it can be confusing at times but I think it's just something to get used to.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
InfatuatedCritic chapter 3 . 8/5/2012
You've got an interesting start here. The only thing I suggest is to watch the phrasing in your narrative, since some of it is a bit awkward. Have you tried reading your chapter out loud? That would definitely help.

Another thing I suggest is to add more detail about the setting. I had a faint idea of what it was, but a little more detail would help both me and future readers.

Best of luck with your writing, and with this story. :)
Starsinger chapter 3 . 8/4/2012
Interesting story, I look forward to more. Although, your phrasing is a little odd here and there.
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