Reviews for Becoming Sober
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
potent and powerful and true. i hope it works out for you. you have more courage than me!
wordsaresodifficult chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
That's wonderful! Great poem!
Purplemonkey123 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
There is a lot to like about this poem. I love the use of repetition, I love the way it is worded, I think my favorite stanza is the first and even though I can't say I completely understand what the poem is talking about (because i've never had an alcohol problem) I've known people who have gone through this and even died because of it :( and i really like the message I get from the poem. Well done!
Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
the rhyme in this is amazing. I really enjoyed that and admire you for being strong and staying sober. It's a hard habit to break and this is inspiring to read. Great write.