Reviews for The End Times
MysteriousFire chapter 17 . 10/22/2012
They've warned him already forty-seven times made me laugh!
Have fun searching all the tomes and runes... Good thing Arthur could feel it.
MysteriousFire chapter 16 . 10/17/2012
Why is it that every new character you introduce is a bit peculiar? xD I like Nathaniel however :) He seems nice and a good teacher!
PureHeartsWait chapter 4 . 10/16/2012
Nicely done :)
jakbnimble chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
This is pretty amazing. I can't wait to catch up. I love how you introduced the three characters with a bellowing roar atop the hill - just awesome!
MysteriousFire chapter 15 . 10/13/2012
My favourite chapter so far! :D I love Alice ;D
MysteriousFire chapter 14 . 10/13/2012
I think the Mad Hatter is an Englishman. Always drinking tea ;)
I love that there is Hatter-hair in his wand!
Hehe, may the odds be ever in your favour xp
I love this chapter! :)
MysteriousFire chapter 13 . 10/4/2012
Aw I like that he can still have good times like before. And stop making me like Harnor more with every chapter! :p
Now Mad Hatter, get Arthur his wand. We're ready for some action!
MysteriousFire chapter 12 . 10/4/2012
Cornelius is much nices than he shows I think.
And I feel so sorry for Arthur :'(
MysteriousFire chapter 11 . 9/2/2012
Galeron is the Dark Destroyer? Why did I already expect that? ;)
And I like the Mikado spell :p
MysteriousFire chapter 10 . 9/2/2012
I love the descriptions. It's almost like watching a film :p
And I'm so sorry for Harnor in this chapter!
trevomogo chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Interesting story, I would definitely like to hear more. The only thing that bothers me is when you gave the Description of Harnor. He was, he was, he was was kind of choppy and had a bad flow to it. The eye patch did not fit the stereotypical image of an elf would be a better way to give the information.
MysteriousFire chapter 9 . 9/1/2012
Haha Hatter yelling weee made me laugh :D
Can't wait to know what happens...
MysteriousFire chapter 8 . 9/1/2012
I read that book too I think...
Lol, I like Arthur being in love x)
PureHeartsWait chapter 3 . 8/29/2012
Great job! I'm loving this story and this Mari girls seems like a very interesting character :D
MerryNightWanderer chapter 8 . 8/29/2012
Make fun of my last name one more time, and I will beat you to death will a shovel. Other than that, very well written and compelling chapter :)
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