Reviews for Lou's Diner
oldwolf81 chapter 5 . 8/3/2012
Lou's Diner?
liberalcookie chapter 3 . 7/30/2012
Great story so far! I think you have really strong character development. Watch out for misplaced commas; I think that's pretty much the only grammar mistake I saw. Your descriptions are very well-written. I can't wait to read the rest. :)