Hi, I meant to review this some time ago, but I guess I never got around to it. Anyways, I got pulled into the story when I learned it took place in New Chicago. I love Chicago, so that was the first thing that got my attention. In the shortest sense, I love this story! It's well written, so please keep it up.

Yeah... awkward review timing... Anyways sorry to bother you but I just checked your profile and saw that you need a beta reader and wanted to let you know that I'll be happy to do the job!

This story is very original and creative. I can't believe it only only has one review! I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't give up! :D

Wow, nicely done. Interesting idea, and very well written prologue. I esspecially liked the last sentance. I hope there will be more to come!
-steph