Reviews for Frail
Technorganic Knight chapter 1 . 3/29
...I think I died because of the sheer fineness and divinity of this poem. I can't say much else to praise your work other than "this needs more recognition" and "you probably expect what I will say in this review".
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Wait, it's 2012. Doth eyes hear Shakespeare words? I LOVE YOU FOR THAT!

Now, seriously, don't mind me, I'm a crazy Shakespeare freak ("Macbeth! Macbeth! Macbeth! Macbeth! Macbeth! Macbeth! Macbeth! Macbeth! Macbeth! Macbeth!" Witches won't be coming for me because I'm already one XD). You just summarized how I feel sometimes. It's relatable, and very, very well-written.

-Queen Hermie of Shakepeare's Fangirls
Purplemonkey123 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Beautiful! I love how this is worded, the metaphors, the fact that you use inverted sentences. Lovely poem!
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Lovely. I believe only one error, but this is amazing. Keep it up :D