Reviews for Everlasting Naivety
recycledpaper chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Great idea. I'd encourage you to speak to some. You'll be surprised how much more complicated their lives and thoughts are. But the general feeling of your poem came through.
thisnameisnowtaken chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
It's such a nice thought... And oh how I wish I believed in it...
Beautiful little poem - do I have to say that it's original?