Reviews for Colors of the Heart
Sentimental RainCloud chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
LOL. This is so short, wow. I clicked it because it reminded me of a Uverworld song, and I love that song. Skittles indeed conquers all.
Unweighted Book Author chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
It's always hard for me to really review haikus, but I'll say that the title of the piece captured my attention, mainly because it reminded me of a DJ Max song. Did inspiration come from there, I wonder? As for the poem itself, the use of 'Colors' in the opening and ending lines make for a nice little encapsulating effect that helps make the message in the middle stand out.
xxxyx chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Ah, Haiku. They have the vague, incomplete feel, but, there is no more effective poetry that keeps the mind thinking for long durations with so little words, and reread and reread it again. As for this particular piece... yes. One could write a full, lengthy article titled 'colors of the heart' based on this poem.
Lolitroy chapter 1 . 5/5/2013

This is probably the shortest poem I've ever read, heh. But you're right. Colors conquer all :3
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
This was good. Simple but really effective. I liked the idea that being yourself means you will succeed over those who don't.
Great poem!
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
I like the directive tone in this. Beautiful message to be always be yourself.
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Wonderful, so much is said in so few words. I love it. :)
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Ver lovely and so true. In such few words, a lot is said. This haiku also has a charming flow. Beautiful job, keep it up :D