Reviews for Delivery
KandiYumYum chapter 1 . 8/7/2019
That was sooo good! I was expecting a choppy story with good bones, but this short story was great.
harrisonmarks chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Great story. More to come?
AK chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
WHAT THE F*** IS THIS ,WHAM BHAM THANK YOU MISTER!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
I loved this, please write a sequel or something I need more
morningstorm70 chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
For your first mpreg I am impressed that was very good
Kudos to you
nabbet chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
This is really awesome please I want you to continue.
DarkxWriter chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Nice one, I loved it.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
For such a short story it was very engrossing, packed full of detail, but not so much that it bogged the reader down. I agree with other reviewers that is it rather sad at the end, but a dragon is not a human, nor would they think like one. The dragon's attitude feels spot on. Wonderful work. I would like to see a continuation of this, or anything else you deem to grace us starving readers with.
Wings of Beauty chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Wow... this is rather interesting. If you continued this, I would definitely read it!
kichou chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
wow this is amazing ! great !
mo person chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Isn't that a bit sad, though? To go through that and then just leave? Leave your... Eggs... Children?
Great oneshot.
Snarky64 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Poor dragon boy to be so disposable after such exertion to produce the eggs. One assumes, had he not mated, perhaps the boy would be prey rather than mate. Interesting.