Reviews for Taradino's Rise of the Triad
diza chapter 1 . 1/5
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ARH fortheloveofwriting chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
As soon as I clicked this and saw Chapter 1 POOP, my first thought was, 'Oh boy, what am I getting myself into?' I think you want to work a little on your transitions, smooth out things a bit. I was completely confused about what was happening in the beginning, and all I understood was they were in the place, POOP. I'm not saying this is bad or anything, I'm just saying I was confused.