Reviews for The Kingdom Chronicles |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AH! You need to update! Seriously, don't even THINK of abondoning it! I love it, it's beautiful! Geez, Lui's evil! Why's he doing this? I need to know! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mm, I'm definitely enjoying this! Good job! Sorry, I mean great job! The storyline's very good and very interesting. I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I'm interested! I hope you write some more. Your doing well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this, and I'd really like to see what happens next. Your description was good, and I love your writing style. I loved the story of the ancestors! Just one tiny little thing in this line: "Believed to be the place that the spirits of the universe has claimed on earth, no soul has ever dared to go theresince the dawn of time." There should be a space between 'there' and 'since'. Just a tiny little typo, but otherwise, good job! |