Reviews for there's a fly in my soup
SilenceInHonour chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Ohh I love all of the "weeds in the garden" - all of the bad things starting to leak through. It's unique and that's what good poems should always be. :)

One spelling mistake I spotted:
optomistic - optimistic

And I really feel like I should say more, praise this more (because I really do love it) but I don't know what to say. :(