Reviews for Throw a penny and it may sink
SilenceInHonour chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I like the fact you started with the word 'and' like your narrator had been thinking things over for a long time without coming to a conclusion. I also like how this is kind of unresolved, just a snippet in the life of this person. I feel like it's not my business to know the rest.

This is shorter than you're other poems but I think that works with the story it tells.

Silly
KillerMuffinish chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
That was better that any story! Ehm, I'm sort of lost for words - in the good way -, I really liked this poem, it's intense and well written. I wish I had more to say but I can't come up with any words, sadly. Just wanted to let you know that this is a lovely poem and that you did a good job.

-Watty. :)