omg...this story is love. I love the way the characters are written and the fluff is sooooooo adorable. Sad to only see the story at chap8. You've mentioned on your profile that the story hasnt been discontinued, but its has been a while, so an update would be nice! Or an author's note if you do decide to abandon the story. Til then...WILL HAVE FAITH THAT CHAP 9 WILL BE UPDATED SOON.
As for the disease...im going to guess Chronic obstructive pulmonary disease
hooray for google LOL
Hope to hear from you soon! Because we sure hell haven't forgotten this story!

I'm already in love with this story, and I really hope you finish it.

Poor Oliver, love the story and can't wait for more! : D

Really love this story. I hope all is well and that maybe you will have the time to update soon! I am sure I and many others will be delighted to see another chapter and to see this story to its completion!

Great story! Are you going to continue it?

I'm so loving your story! The details, the drama, the suspense! Simply amazing on how you can make this feel like it could happen in real life. Super sad that it has not been updated in a while but I hope you continue because you are a very good writer!

God!im crying i really really hate atticus but he does love ollie..thats why i dont understand why he is such a fucking jerk to him!
And i really like ollie but he is an IDIOT how can he allow been treated like that?!
And "because i will die someday and he will be lonely" is the most stupid reason i have ever heard!

Atticus you hoe! If he seriously sleeps with Jensen I'll kill him. Lol, I love it!

Just found your story and am super excited fir it!

Please don't tell me Atticus slept with Jensen that night 2 years ago

I can't stand how Ollie is letting Atticus walk all over him, just because he COULD die. Yeah, I saw that wording. What if he didn't die? Atticus would treat him like shit for the rest of their relationship. Ugh... Really hard to like Atticus. I'm trying, but his flaws are so overwhelming. Haha. Let's get some Jensen and Ollie action going, Jyess? Haha! No, but on a serious note at first, I was thinking TB... Coughing of blood. General malaise... But Idk the treatment for TB other than AB's... So it could be used in an inhaler? If he already has it, I would think it would be too late for preventive measures like vaccines. Idk... Ack! Haha

I love this story hadnt review because I havent been in fanfiction love this chapter I want Atticus to start treating Oliver better I feel sad of Oliver and I think Jensen is in love of Oliver would love to see them together to see the reaction of Atticus hope to see more of you ;) and hopefully soon.

all the things i said is true, so your thanks is unnecessary. but if you are saying thank you since i critic and commented in your story, well, your welcome.

to the chapter itself, the most recent one, i would say that despite my anticipation of pain and sadness in the future, deep down i am hoping for some happiness. but i wont tell you what to write since it is your story. But i just want you to know, with your constant thank you and story updates, you are proving to me that you will not let this story die and without a closure. i do not trust you completely, but thank you for never letting me doubt, so far, that you will suddenly disappear.

feel something. and thats what you are. dont give up! ;D

I understand that it is possible to have complicting or mix up feelings but I never thought I will have with pain and happiness with Oliver's life situation. i could have pick side if you are with only one perspective, but since you gave both attie and olie's point of view, I saw both of their pain and happiness with each other. it is hard not to shake olie to realize he should tell attie but his situation, but I cant really argue with his mind. that is why I felt the same frustration as jensen, and admired his dedication to ollie and strong will not to tell attie or punch him for cheating because that will eventually lead to explanations, especially what started. Ollie's sickness. I feel numb right now. dont know what to feel. just want to include that good writer write good stories. Great writers, make the readers fee