Reviews for Birthday
lifesjustbegun chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
The dialogue towards the end is a little confusing. It's hard to tell who's speaking to who. I like the two characters but i don't think that it's realistic for them to verbally discuss their ethnicity to each other when they've been friends for so many years. I feel like that's something that the narrator could have added in when giving a description of their appearance. Anyway keep writing!
Felix Golden chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
You got one. This is SOOOOOOO cute. I love how Gabby and Coreen started as best friends and now they're almost married.
MJ chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Awwhh, nice ... good job man:)
Readnotwrite chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Great story!
The Eternally Heartbroken chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Pretty cute! I'd like to see more, if you have any?
zutAra101 chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Aww, so sweet.

Really liked this; I was smiling all the way through.

Thanks for putting it up.

-Z