Reviews for The General's Daughter, School Daze
R. Ficst chapter 13 . 4/5
Jackie is just fabulous. I love how her dad knew her right away, just like last time, and I love how Daniel's discovery prompted a march to a not-his-office, echoing the events in the first book when her dad discovers her. The kids are adorable, and I love how Jackie is making a difference. Very curious to see where you take the MIB/CIA in the next books. Forward!
Lucasta chapter 13 . 9/14/2012
Oh my goodness, I love Fred. He's so canny. Thanks for finishing this story. It was very good. Thanks for sharing.
Bored411 chapter 13 . 9/14/2012
ahaha XD great ending! I love how fred totally wants to kill daniel since he's defiled his little girl :) i'm sad this is the end already, but i'm reading Frankie Peterman, MD so i'll be looking forward to it's updates now that this one is complete ;P
FORD B1 chapter 13 . 9/14/2012
Awesome read and ending!
FORD B1 chapter 12 . 9/11/2012
Excellent chapter!
Lucasta chapter 12 . 9/11/2012
Ooh, things are heating up. I loved the little interval in the supplies closet. Lol. I really enjoyed this chapter.
Bored411 chapter 12 . 9/10/2012
dude! i hope the recording could help clear up bobby's mess. and i totally wanted to see jackie kick some butt too T.T update again soon though! maybe i can see some butt kicking yet ;) especially since i'm sure fred has something to say about langley touching his daughter
FORD B1 chapter 11 . 9/4/2012
Awesome chapters!
Lucasta chapter 11 . 9/4/2012
Hilarious! Daniel too busy checking out his wife's butt to know it's her. LOL Thanks for the update. :-D
Bored411 chapter 11 . 9/4/2012
can't wait to see if what jackie has planned works update again when you can! this chapter was great and i love how daniel was checking her out without knowing it was his own wife XD
Lucasta chapter 10 . 8/29/2012
Another good chapter. Interesting prediction that Jackie will have a boy. I love the fact she's gone incognito again. That new teacher is terrible.
Bored411 chapter 10 . 8/29/2012
wow. stupid teachers :P update again when you can! i can't wait to see what else Jackie does.
FORD B1 chapter 9 . 8/27/2012
Another great chapter!
Bored411 chapter 9 . 8/26/2012
wow. stupid principal doesn't know what he's talking about :( update again when you can! i can't wait to see when Jackie shows up that old man
Lucasta chapter 9 . 8/26/2012
Great chapter, as always. You capture the time period very well. I love Jackie and the way she interacts the kids is so good.

LOL about Frank when Bambi told him they're pregnant. :-D
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