|Reviews for In the Arms of Darkness|
| Chikni Chameli The Second chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
That was so good! It was really well-written and I felt like I was the girl. The length of the story just added to the effect. All the emotions and all were perfectly expressed. I loved it.
Chikni Chameli The Second
| ThePictureofaWriter chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
very creepy but well-written! the emotions you managed to pack in to such a short story is impressive.
| Kat Annie chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
It's interesting how you layered this story...at first I thought she was dying woke for a moment to see the women, but now I wonder if the woman was on the other side to meet her. I love how many possibilities and interpretations there are for such a short glimpse into your writing.
| Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Is this what happened to the Little Match Girl?
Sorry, I'm rather rude at times. But, I do like it! Except I do have a piece of advice for you: it's spelled "one-shot", not "one-short". It may be a spelling mistake or it may be just a mistake because you thought it was spelled that way, but either way it's not "one-short".