Reviews for Thirteen Steps Back
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
I like this poem, I think you've done a really great job. Relating this 'self destructive force' to a hand trying to pull you underwater is a really effective start, its attention grabbing and disconcerting imagery.
I also like the constant references to depth through the images of falling and being dragged down, I think it works really well in creating a dark mood for this piece.
Great job

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