|Reviews for Birdhouse|
| JHeartbreak chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
I like this a lot. It kind of confuses me... like, I'm not sure if Benedict's asexuality and his inability to love are connected or not, and I have no idea why Jack puts up with him. But it's still an interesting story.
What I liked the most is just that you take time to explore the scenes. There's no setup and then follow-through, because the setup is the follow-through. It's very economical, and I think it's this economy that gives the story its emotional power. I like the title too - not too obvious but not nonsense either.
I'd still like to see you dig a bit deeper into the characters. Like I said, I can guess why they're together, but I don't know. This ambiguity isn't the kind that makes the story deeper, it just diffuses some of the power. But I can see that your ability as a writer has kept growing.
| Aletiah chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
I really like this, a bit sad it doesn't continues. There are a lot of things in this I want to know more about. Good job!