YAY I WAS RIGHT! THE CHEMISTRY BEGINS! :D

Whoa that was ... sudden. Poor Corey, Riley has to take his place now but ... ahh must go on reading

Aw noooo! She has to get into the boy band! Otherwise there will never be chemistry between her and Ryan/BlueHair LOL

HAHA OMG I love Riley's sense of humor!

Ahaha I love this story! Riley's such a funny chill character - I wonder how it might be like for her to join a boy band... Ehehe if a match is made I hope it's Riley/Maroon Hair LOLOLOL

The first thing I notice? Witty sarcasm. xD So like you. I feel like the opening could've been better, but it fit the character very well so I can't complain too much. c:

[Cracker, Corey, Ryan, Tristan, Brody, and I (damn, we had a lot of people in our group)] I think even you realize that that's a crap load of people to name. Instead of naming them all, you could've just used pronouns. (We, the group, the band and Cracker, ect.) I mean, it isn't that big of a deal, but it's kinda a lot to read over, right? xD

And, as I'm reading, I'm noticing a lot of commentary that suggests Riley is highly interested in Ryan. Oh god, that girl is so transparent. xD Riley, get a HOLD of yourself, gurl!

[The whole day, all of us were on our toes (sans Cracker, Lacey, and Corey), but we somehow made it through unscarred.] Wait, what were they doing all day? Am I a bad reader? Dx I totally forget why Lacey is with them and what they are all doing. /awkward. Maybe it's best to mention the activities again in the chapter since you didn't go into detail. (... No... Of course I'm not just saying this because I was too lazy to check last chapter... ._.)

WHOA. HIGH SCHOOL DRAMA. WHY WOULD HE ASK THAT BITCH OUT. /is getting too into this.

That awkward moment when Riley suddenly asks Parker if he went to college during the middle of him chewing out Ryan. O_O

Okay, I totally just skipped commenting on the rest after cause I just got so sucked into it. SORREH IF IT SEEMS A LITTLE SHORT. BLAME IT ON YOURSELF FOR MAKING IT ADDICTING. FOR SHAME, GRASSHOPPAH!

Teehee, anyyyyway. Liked the ending and that's all I got left to say. Again, long time no see and I'll be sure to get on reviewing all of the reviews I owe. Trust me, I enjoy it so don't fret. c: Good luck and I'm looking forward to watching your writing grow more and more! :D Bye!

Hm. This is a little more serious than normal, but still really good. I really love Cracker in a totally not-lesbian way (Damn it, Ryan's rubbing off on me!) I love how he's still trying to defend his heterosexuality to himself, and all along Riley's really a girl. I kind of miss Riley's narration, I gotta say. She's a fun character, but I do like seeing Ryan's perspective too. Great chapter, please update soon!

I read your whole story in a day! I absolutely love it... I'd love to see Ryan try and pull something on Riley! That would be hilarious. You're an amazing writer, by the way. If this were a book, I'd defiantly read it. Please update soon! Merry Christmas Happy new year to you!

Please please keep writing I love this story so much please keep writing

Well it's about time I leave a review for this story because I absolutely adore it. Your updates just make me really happy.
So this entire chapter I couldn't help but think of Shang from Mulan. Brilliant. Loved this chapter and can't wait for the next! Keep up the great work and have a happy new year!

Man I love your stories sooo much! Can't wait for an update, but I guess I'll have to wait.

I do the same thing by the way. Procrastination just comes naturally to me. My mom does it too, but not near as drastically as me. Also, my procrastinator buddies have all stopped procrastinating. I mean if your gonna say you do something you can at least do it!

But I guess I should be happy for them.

Well I best get back to writing my own stories, so I can get a few chapters ahead, and not make my followers wait for weeks at a time. Not that I'm complaining, or anything.

Love you, and your stories forever! Keep up the good work. :D

Well, here some of my time...
It was nice how Cracker is awesome, but I'm guessing that Riley will have a scolding or something from her XD

This is good! Update soon!

Ah, I love it when Ryan has his bitching fits (pardon my French). As annoying as it must be for all the band members, it's quite entertaining to read from.

One Direction album? I'm not a huge fan—I'm more of an N'SYNC kind of girl—but I'll admit, their songs are pretty damn catchy. Louis is the hottest, in my opinion. Not that I've thought about it much.

Aw, Riley has a crush : D so things are starting to get interesting. It already was before, but now the real action's coming in. Yay!

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Okay, I'm guessin you were going for that humorous thing again, and it worked quite well. Enjoying it all so far : P

It's me – again. I know, you're probably sick of me and my reviews by now, but I figured that a couple more words of feedback couldn't hurt. This doesn't seem like your usual style; your characters are usually in high school, from what I've seen, and Riley is auditioning for a boy band.

Nice call on the cross-dresser thing, by the way. I've never seen a boy band cross-dresser story, so keep it up! Update soon.

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