|Reviews for My Book|
| Dianaartemis chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Your ideas are presented very strong in this poem. What I would recommend is that you play around with enjambment more to give more meaning to the end-stop lines.
| Mayu Sun chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
| C.J. Black chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
I however, disagree with Dark-Abyss, this was not 'an interesting piece' this is a stunning work of art. Amen! I wish more people thought of them-self's in this respect.
| walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
This was definitely an interesting piece, I like it how you emphasised that your book is your own ideals and beliefs, that part I especially liked.