I really enjoyed this fiction. So sad, that it ended there. And there would be so much potential for a spin off. Like Luc's training :D Greetings from Germany

wow

Eep! I don't want Luc to die! He's my favorite! I love this story. It's compelling. Wonderful job. Xoxo Robin

I adore this story. The interactions are complicated but fascinating. Excellent job. Xoxo Robin

Please continue this story:)

I don't know why Lucent didn't want a new beats and tortures him and whores him out.

Lucent got kidnapped?! Well, Lucent was the only one that got kidnapped so I would think that the kidnapper only want Lucent, not the other slave, and he managed to remove the collar meaning that he must be someone that's powerful and rich enough that he might also had a slave and knew how to remove the collar. Seeing that he also managed to cut the line.

So, if I have to guess the kidnapper is the one that is interested in Lucent when they 'met' in the mall and got in a fight with Cassious because of it.

I hope they found Lucent soon. Even though I knew that when he found Lucent there will be some drama involve. I really like Cale that's why I want him to get better and got a better treatment. Poor him, Lucent seems to be really angry at him.

Even though it's Cale birthday a few chapter back. I don't see something that makes me really happy, after all he got all the punishment. Poor him. I really hate Trent! I hope Lucent won't be mad at him anymore. It makes me want to change my favorite character, since there's nothing really good that has happen to him, or more like every time there's something good happen, bad thing will happen soon after. But I can't seem to change my favorite character, please make it easier for him.

All in all, it means that I really want to see the next one, so please update soon!XD

I sincerely hope this story to be updated, but if not I want to thank you for it. The story was awesome and enthralling.

Yay! So happy for this update I love this story! Keep writing! :)

Gosh darn it the feels

Love this story. It's very creative and keeps me interested. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Xoxo Robin

Poor Cale, I love him so much he's so sweet and I like how he still refuses to completely conform to Cassious demands and abuse. Cass is a lot meaner and harsher, I'd probably scream my head off if someone carved something in my skin, geez...

I can't read the latest chapter, the format is weird

Interesting turn of events... Glad your back :)

so good :)