Reviews for Sunrise
Lem Grey chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I cannot possibly stress how much I love this. It seems indecent, but I spent much of the time thinking how cute it was. And. Then. The end. Oh. *sob* Perfection, Tom. Perfection.
Margaret Casady chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
This play is vary strong in character development. i love how it is sad, but sweet at the same time. It pulled me along and i could not stop reading.
Fakety Mcfakename chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
That was fun! Really fun! I loved the bit of aburdity in the middle about slugs and anomalies, that was straight douglass adams. Over all, a very moving story, i would just put in a little bit more back story, just a little, so we know that they alteast knew each other before tonight (regardless of how romantic you are, falling in love in 20 minutes isn't going to happen. lust maybe). also, maybe change a name so they don't both start with S, kindoff confusing. Maybe add some blocking, people passing by. I liked this play. It was... sweet.