|Reviews for Once Upon a Sixth Grade Year|
| SkinnyLove203 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
this is cool :)
| rowen-claw chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Great! I love how this so vividly describes the sort of person the teacher was and how the narrator loved the story. You have a gift for rhythm, and you use it well in this poem. My only quibbles are the 'But' in 'But I promised myself...' (the 'But' seems a bit unnecessary, but I understand it's inclusion so that the meter would stay regular, but I suggest that you replace it with 'so' or 'and') and the last line... It might be just me but it sounded a bit out of place. Did you mean the first line was 'there once was an army' or that was the first part or what? I'm not sure how that can be fixed, but yeah...
Awesome poem! :) Please write more!