Reviews for A Flower to You
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
You should practice writing first person a bit more, but this is pretty good considering that it's out of your comfort zone! :) I love the story line, but the main character is a bit too cheesy and unreal. Her death is also a bit confusing. Good job! 3
Total Light chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
AWWW! That was really sweet!
That was well written and very touching!
I loved it!
Jinny D chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
That was amazing oh my god I love how you write! You should make a manga book too because you're amazing at writing and drawing!
melodygogo chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
The story was amazing and the twist at the end was completely unexpected...left me wishing for more flashbacks. so sad :( but really good plot and imagery
Zoe1013 chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
The twist at the end was unexpected. It was a nice and short read. Also, the the way you wrote the flashback also cleared all questions of how they started dating. Keep up the nice work.
-Zoe1013
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Wow! Great writing! :) I loved the story, but of course it was very sad. :( How did you come up with that idea? You have an amazing gift for painting an image of the scene and people in your reader's mind. I could imagine everything vividly. I hope you will keep writing more cool stories! - UJ
Dwynwen chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Wow. I didn't see that twist coming at all.

It's a good story!