Reviews for Hell's Daughter
AmericanBeauty-AmericanPsycho chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
Yep. You should post soon. I really like the idea of this!
AmericanBeauty-AmericanPsycho chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Just like I promised. I reviewed.
This is supper morbid. Which is fine. But it's scaring me how much i like this(: haha keep posting!
SimonClemens chapter 2 . 8/6/2012
On second thought, the logistics of this just rub me the wrong way. If she had a split personality or something, her inability to stop herself would make more sense, but the reason now seems too weak. A trance? I don't know if you know this, but the only real way for a person to be in a trance is willingly. As far as I'm concerned, this character is monstrously impulsive and selfish, and perfectly sane.
And her reason for feeling different is also weak.
Hair? Really?! Just get your mom to dye...
I must rephrase that. She could have just dyed it.
SimonClemens chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
What is it with you and decapitated hamsters? That aside, it was written well enough.
The dialogue's a little off, though. Just reading some parts aloud make it obvious how it doesn't quite flow.
I'm sure you'll get a hang of that, though.