|Reviews for Silent|
| lilac-snowflakes chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Hey! This story had a very, very important message that I think everyone should take to their heart. It's so unfortunate that the situation you wrote about happens on a daily basis. If it's something from your personal life, my best wishes and condolences.
Because you already have something really great going on here, I thought I'd share some of my ideas, if you don't mind. I think if you drew this out a little longer and delved deeper into the emotional aspects (which I know can be very difficult), I think this story would have an even bigger impact. I felt that the ending in particular seemed a little rushed-if you wrote a little bit more about why it's so important not to be silent, I think that would enhance your story all that more!
Great job :)