|Reviews for Road Trip|
| RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I like the lack of capitalisation I think it aids the rhythm and flow of the poem. I love your word choices and similies, the rain on the windshield smarting like slaps for example, theyr really unique descriptions.
Overall, amazing piece.
Ceri from the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in profile)