Reviews for she's already lost so much
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
i love your writing style. you know just which details to include, how to evoke emotion even by just listing facts and show so much about this girl in such a short piece. the first paragraph is so specific that it shows her emotional state while still retained a sort of detached distance - it's such an interesting contrast and you write it beautifully. especially the line about luggage waiting to fall on her shoulders.
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
It's such a deep poem and it's very well written and I like the ending a lot as well ;). The last few lines are the best part because it makes it a fantastically deep poem and I really like your poetry!