Reviews for Sitting Straight
having chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
good
Beth Brooks chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
wow, very honest and deep piece, i enjoyed reading it, very realtiable! Good work!
thetabbykitteh chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Aw I too know how it feels to hide ur true self and feelings from the world. I wish sometimes I could tell people, but...
Lencionim chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Small grammar thing: "Lies is what put it to shame" should be "Lies [are] what put it to shame".

I think this is a poem a lot of people can relate to. It sounded more like prose than poetry, but if that's what you were going for you did a good job of it. The only suggestion I can make is to tighten it a little; eliminate unneeded words.