Reviews for Make Me Feel Alive
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
"She take's every chance she get's to hurt me"... takes, gets

"It's the only thing that makes me sure" this should be they are since it refers back to cuts and bruises

"From those evil eyes of her"... hers

"With every step she take".. takes

I like this. It's really powerful and definitely shows how horribly devastating love can be, but also how sometimes that's not enough to make us leave. Nice job.

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