Reviews for Lies
DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Another very powerful poem. I like how you have especially used sterotypes to emphasise the key points in your poem. The layout is also very effective; opening with the speech then saying that the narrator is lying and then continuing the story behind that lie, always using a question in each verse to reinforce your point/message, and then playing it down again at the end of each verse and concluding each with a a hard hitting line each more poignant than the last. Well done again :)