Reviews for Mommy
HE988765 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I am beyond words. Wow. But...I think expanding it, adding more to the story might add to the quality. Even if you don't, it's amazing.
BrightlyShining1 chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
I really liked this. It's sort of easy to read and has some kind of a nice flow; I like the choice of words and just about everything else. Yet you didn't neglect the actual content.