Reviews for Snow
Starry-eyed Starfish chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Gruesome :'(
It reminds me of the movie 127 hours but probably grosser - is that a word? - because (( well, it's insinuated )) that he EATS his leg :O
I like the way you insinuated it though :D
You're very skilled in this genre; keep it up :3
Noctiphobia chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
I think it should have been a tad longer, just add something like what he felt exactly, did it hurt, was there a big difference in temperature in the cave, did he hesitate at all before he did what he had to do? It was a good plot and was put together well. I just think it needs more to it. Like this is a skeleton of a story and you need to add flesh to it. (No pun intended.)