Reviews for Take Your Time
RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
The repetition of You at the start of the first stanza is really effective, it captures my attention from the beginning.
I also like your formatting, the stanzas are long enough to say something solid but short enough not to make the rhythm too complex.
Noticed a spelling typo in the penultimate stanza, should say signed.
But good job :)

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