|Reviews for Miscellaneous Haiku|
| EndlessFlight chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Utter Boredom is really good.
| Abbytjie chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I like the comparison between voices and a brook, and the suddenness of the silence. You describe it really well.
In the last line, it should be "trees' leaves" Since there's more than one tree, the apostrophe goes at the end.
I like the line "The reeds are waving at me" It's so much better than saying that they're moving in the wind.
A beautiful image in this one.
I like the first two lines of this one, but the last one seems a bit stating-the-obvious, I think there should be a better way of saying it.
This poem is also a bit stating-the-obvious, and not as good as the others, in my opinion. It lacks the images and beauty of the others.
Not a morning person
Why 'you snore' and not 'I snore'? Other than that, I like that simple descriptions make up this one to create the scene.
I can give the same review for this one as fo water spiders: good first two lines, obvious last one.
P.S. You should put these poems under Poems-Haiku
P.P.S. If you are considering adding more, you might want to put it one haiku per chapter.