Reviews for Dragon Tale |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Picking the pace back up after the calm here, and that's great. Can't wait for them to work things out thoroughly. Also Drew - you never ask if things could get crazier. The answer is always 'yes'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's one helluva perk! And as per usual, loving it. A calm chapter in the right place ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Development! Comebacks! One liner! Dramatic exclamation marks! Can this be getting better? I think it can! Great to see you the touch is still here and the plot is on spot. Loving it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Writing full of expression and character, more than the last chapter ) not gonna write more because I'm off to the next chapter /can'tstop |
![]() ![]() ![]() You kidding me or what? Same quality and direct continuation of the story? That's awesome! As usual I'm in the middle of doing something else while reading this but it's worth it. ] I missed this story and they guys. Happy to have you back and writing! 82 and 83, here I come! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, I think this story rocks because I like how everyone is developing on their own. The adventure is a good time for everyone but the twist that Simon (BlueDragon) is running this show is both predictable and a surprise. This is one story I want to see finished and see how it all ends up. I don't have much to say really because stories like this keep me on the edge of my seat. I hope to read on as more gets posted. |
![]() ![]() After a year and half and that was epic dude |
![]() ![]() ![]() Writing fro a stupidphone is a headache, but this chapter was just soooo good! A lot of feelings in here, and as usual you did a remarkable job at conveying them to, well, if not everyone who reads this then just me. Its been a whil since I read a chapter and let alone write any review, I missed this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I am new here on fictionpress. I joined this site to share my own story, but mainly to find a good adventure book. I am only on chapter three of your story and already love what you are doing with it. Can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this looks like fun, and good chapter! Ill be waiting for the next one to see how the competition goes ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chspter, and good as prequal. It feels like a breather and it was nice to see some more interaction between people. Im finally about to catch up, at lunch tomorrow , hopefully. Gotta say, I got to ch 70 and its been a very fun ride so far, and thats pretty far. Keep it up, its a greay pleasure to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter rings well, and nice flow of events! Pretty relaxing chapter, Id say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A night before the final presentations of nearly all of my projects, the rest are going to be in the coming couple of days. I wont review this chapter now, Ill review after reading thenext one. But, thanks for the much needed break and the visit in the s Sixs wonderful world, that still makes me happy. Also Aww, Eryk is talking like a little royal prince! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very different chapter writing wise, I dont know how far into details I should go and it will be easier done if I used my pc... If/when you get a chance to reply and want me to get into that, let me know and Ill do it when Im home. Story wise - Awesome! Dragons that are so unique so far! This is great, and Im having a blast reading every time. Kinda wild idea, but I wonder what will happen if the six will get their own dragon for an arc... Like, one thats actualy helping them... Theyre always getting messed up with people-scaled problems that end up with dragons, what will happen if theyll get messed up wirh dasgon-scaled problems? And how could a dragon help them?... I gotta stop rumbling, back to study! And yourevdoing great, dont stop! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And perfect it shal be!... I hope... As much as possible... Ughh. I really was cobfused when I went through the first part of this chapter, but I think its thanks to the fact that Im studying without breaks for too long. I honestly expected some plotholes when you sais its going to be confusing, but there werent and by the end of this part I was able ro follow well enough. Also sorry for typos here as Im using my smartphone now. Ow yeah, and the second part is pretty clear though Id be more suspicious about meeting someone like that... its not like they dont have illusions over there... Anyways cool chapter,now going back to study. |