|Reviews for Masks|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Thanks your PM it's always great to get someone's point of view.
"If the mask should fall,/it can be glued back together/unless it shattered,"... The phrasing there just seemed awkward because I felt like after the choose well thing I expected it to be that if the mask falls then something bad would happen and then it was something that was kinda okay.
I did like the concept I think that the idea of masks has been done a lot in poetry and I think your take on it was different. I especially liked the part about decorating the mask and how people don't like naked faces. Nice job.
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| SilenceInHonour chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
I love this! I felt like I wanted it to go a bit slower though, just so that I could read more. I love the last eight lines, and how the last four sum up the whole poem. It reminds me of my novel characters (not on fictionpress) since they hide behind masks a lot, not even trying to be themselves. Basically I can identify with this, as can anyone really, hardly anyone shows their full true self.