Reviews for Welcome to the Circus
BadRose07 chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Well written, as usual. I like Warren, maybe he'll get I.R. to settle.
Scarlet-SKull chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
-"Ah," she mused. "Our snake-charmer went to Stanford,"-

That made me smile. Think here was like a hidden message in that one, not sure. Overall, I like this piece-the characters, the very believable entertainment. Those two friends reminded me of those girls from Sucker Punch. Not sure if you watched it. They live to entertain men (this scenario is a little different but their characters are strikingly similar) I liked how the description and dialogue was balanced, and how you enforced the atmosphere with that guy on the megaphone Well written.
StarryEyedWonder17 chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Cool story!
Reeech Beeetch chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Very intriguing summary. There's something about a circus that makes me curious and a little bit afraid. But is your manuscript really complete? If it is, I was just maybe expecting something more action packed, I guess. Hope this helps. Cheers!