|Reviews for Le Océan d'Auguste|
| Dreamers-Requiem chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
I have to agree with the other reviewer; there's an epic feel to this poem, but one I think could be enhanced slightly. Some of the lines don't seem to fit togehter, possibly because of the wording; I know it's one of the things I keep mentioning with your other stuff, but in some cases I think you could convey the same things in a slightly simpler way?
| Umekogal chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
The title caught me a little off guard when I received the notification. For one moment I thought you were going to do a poem in French. I liked the poem for its almost epic feel to it. Happy National Day.